From: Disciplinary variations in academic promotional writing: the case of statements of purpose
Moves | Descriptions |
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Move 1: Introduction | This move is primarily used by the applicant to get readers’ attention or to provide a brief introduction of the SoP’s content. |
Step 1-A: Generalization/Attention catcher | The applicant provides descriptions to catch readers’ attention or to claim the statement’s aim. |
Step 1-B: Background | The applicant states his/her education and personal background information. |
Step 1-C: Goals or decisions to applying | The applicant states his/her goal or decision to applying for the target program. |
Move 2: Establishing credential | This move reveals the applicant’s relevant credentials for studying and conducting research at the graduate level. |
Step 2-A: Education background | The applicant reveals academic achievements related to the proposed field of study. |
Step 2-B: Research experience | The applicant addresses research experiences, research interests or potential topics for graduate research. |
Step 2-C: Work experience | The applicant discusses professional experiences. |
Step 2-D: Personal attributes | The applicant describes personal attributes that he/she believes are appealing to the target program. |
Step 2-E: Other experience | The applicant provides other personal information such as language/cultural knowledge, volunteer experiences and self-reflections. |
Move 3: Reasons for applying | This move is used by the applicant to state reasons for pursuing graduate study at the target program or institution. |
Step 3-A: Gap in applicant background | The applicant discusses how his/her background can be improved by pursuing graduate study at the target program or institution. |
Step 3-B: Positive gains | The applicant describes the positive gains offered by the target program or institution. |
Step 3-C: Program/university attributes | The applicant describes the appeal of the target program or institution. |
Step 3-D: Disciplinary and research reasons | The applicant expresses his/her reasons for applying from the research/discipline perspective. |
Move 4: Conclusion | This move summarizes the SoP and makes a final appeal for the admission committee’s favorable consideration. |
Step 4-A: Goals/predictions of future | The applicant states his/her future goals or career plan upon the completion of the target program. |
Step 4-B: Self-evaluation | The applicant re-states his/her relevant accomplishments for self-promotion. |
Step 4-C: Final appeal | The applicant makes a final appeal to end the SoP. |